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  1. Samson2024-05-13 at 10:51 pm

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    Writing skills

    Always give further information like( what will happen after this? What is the reason of this? Recent situation…)

     
    Sentence Structure

     Explaining reasons
    1. Among all the reason of …, the most prominent one is that
    reason
    2. With….., in order to do sth, someone need to …
    Based on one reason, the person must do sth to fulfill this
    3. Apparently, …
    Recently situation
    4. When…, someone…
    5. In this way, ….
    The result of sth
    6. Instead of …, someone can ….
    (Giving a new solution)
    7. Given (noun), ….
    Because of sth, they do sth

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